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                      Introduction The 
                  Example: Isa 58  
                    
                      
                    
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          22. Example of Writing 
        your own Commentary  
                     
                     
                    - Isaiah, 
        Ch.58  
         
          How 
          writing your own version can help understanding    
              
            
           Introduction 
              
           Very 
          often when we read the Bible, we really don't take in what is being 
          said, either because the ideas are new to us, or perhaps because of 
          the nature of the language being used.  A 
          simple way to overcome this is to take a passage of Scripture and then 
          write it in your own words.  In 
          the example that follows, the alternate version is NOT a translation 
          but simply a version of what is there in the Scriptures in this writers 
          form.   It 
          is important to understand this:  this example is purely an example 
          of how one modern-day Christian took the English words, there in the 
          New International Version of the Bible, and tried to put them in a different, 
          free-flowing way to help him understand the Scripture.   Please 
          understand - his version is very imperfect and will not cover every 
          detail of what is recorded in the Scripture passage. That is not the 
          objective. It is simply to try to catch the overall sense being conveyed, 
          and it is something personal.  Such 
          an approach is NOT to replace the Scripture but simply help increase 
          personal understanding of what the Scripture passage was saying. No 
          doubt if this student-writer repeated the exercise again in the future, 
          he would use different words, but hopefully still come up with the same 
          overall sense.   We hope you understand.  Isaiah 
          58 has been chosen for no other reason than it was one that the student-writer 
          was considering. It speaks for itself.        The 
          Example : Isaiah 58  
           
            | The 
                Bible Version  |   
                 | This 
                student's version  |   
            | 1 
                "Shout it aloud, do not hold back. Raise your voice like 
                a trumpet. Declare to my people their rebellion and to the house 
                of Jacob their sins. 2 For day after day they seek me out; they seem eager to know 
                my ways, as if they were a nation that does what is right and 
                has not forsaken the commands of its God. They ask me for just 
                decisions and seem eager for God to come near them.
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                 | Isaiah, 
                shout this out so everyone who is part of the people of God hears 
                it! You're going to tell them about their rebellion and their 
                sins!  Look, 
                they give the appearance of being really spiritual. They look 
                like they are keen to know my ways, as if they wanted to do right. 
                They come seeking me as if they want me to be there for them, 
                guiding and helping them.    
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            | 3 
                'Why have we fasted,' they say, 'and you have not seen it? Why 
                have we humbled ourselves, and you have not noticed?'  "Yet 
                on the day of your fasting, you do as you please and exploit all 
                your workers. 4 Your fasting ends in quarrelling and strife, and in striking 
                each other with wicked fists. You cannot fast as you do today 
                and expect your voice to be heard on high.
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                 | Look, 
                they say, we've fasted, we've humbled ourselves and God doesn't 
                seem to have taken any notice.  You 
                don't know why? Because even on the days when you fast you still 
                are self-centred, doing your own thing, trying to manipulate God 
                for your own ends while you are exploiting your workers, quarrelling 
                and fighting among yourselves. You can't be all spiritual on one 
                hand and carry on acting like this on the other, and expect me 
                to respond!    
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            | 5 
                Is this the kind of fast I have chosen, only a day for a man to 
                humble himself? Is it only for bowing one's head like a reed and 
                for lying on sackcloth and ashes? Is that what you call a fast, 
                a day acceptable to the LORD?    
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                 | Is 
                your idea of fasting simply to do outward acts of piety, apparently 
                humbling yourself by bowing down, even wearing sackcloth with 
                ashes? Is that your idea of fasting, because it's not mine!  |   
            | 6 
                "Is not this the kind of fasting I have chosen: to loose 
                the chains of injustice and untie the cords of the yoke, to set 
                the oppressed free and break every yoke? 7 Is it not to share your food with the hungry and to provide 
                the poor wanderer with shelter- when you see the naked, to clothe 
                him, and not to turn away from your own flesh and blood?
   
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                 | The 
                fasting that I have in mind involves acting in such a way that 
                justice prevails in all you do, those who are captive or oppressed 
                are set free, and you provide food for the hungry, shelter for 
                the homeless, clothes for the naked, and you, especially, provide 
                for your own kin. Fasting involves being pious in every area of 
                your lives.  |   
            | 8 
                Then your light will break forth like the dawn, and your healing 
                will quickly appear; then your righteousness will go before you, 
                and the glory of the LORD will be your rear guard. 9 Then you will call, and the LORD will answer; you will cry for 
                help, and he will say: Here am I.
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                 | When 
                you do this, you'll start shining like the people you're designed 
                to be and then healing and righteousness will return to your lives, 
                indeed they will go ahead of you preparing your future for you, 
                while the glory and wonder of the Lord will be seen following 
                all you do.  At 
                such a time when you call on me, I will answer, and a closeness 
                of relationship will be re-established between us.    
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            | "If 
                you do away with the yoke of oppression, with the pointing finger 
                and malicious talk, 10 and if you spend yourselves in behalf of the hungry and satisfy 
                the needs of the oppressed, then your light will rise in the darkness, 
                and your night will become like the noonday.
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                 | Again 
                I say, do away with wrong behaviour, oppressing those who are 
                weaker than you, gossiping maliciously, dragging one another down 
                with words. Instead put your energies into feeding the hungry 
                and setting the oppressed free. When you do this you'll shine 
                in the darkness of the world and your lives will be full of light 
                all the time.    
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            | 11 
                The LORD will guide you always; he will satisfy your needs in 
                a sun-scorched land and will strengthen your frame. You will be 
                like a well-watered garden, like a spring whose waters never fail. 
                12 Your people will rebuild the ancient ruins and will raise up 
                the age-old foundations; you will be called Repairer of Broken 
                Walls, Restorer of Streets with Dwellings.
   
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                 | Again, 
                when you do this, the Lord will be your constant guide and will 
                bring satisfaction to you even when life seems dry and barren 
                and you feel weak. Instead you will flourish like a well watered 
                garden.  At 
                that time you will restore what was broken down and lost in the 
                past, and you will be seen as those who bring order and blessing 
                to the community.  |   
            | 13 
                "If you keep your feet from breaking the Sabbath and from 
                doing as you please on my holy day, if you call the Sabbath a 
                delight and the LORD's holy day honourable, and if you honour 
                it by not going your own way and not doing as you please or speaking 
                idle words, 14 then you will find your joy in the LORD , and I will cause 
                you to ride on the heights of the land and to feast on the inheritance 
                of your father Jacob." The mouth of the LORD has spoken.
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                 | Look, 
                this all includes how you honour God on the day he's given you 
                to rest. If you restore this day and make it a blessing instead 
                of a bane, in the way you honour the Lord, then you will find 
                a joy returning to your relationship with the Lord and I will 
                enable you to rise up and enjoy even the difficult parts of life, 
                and really receive and rejoice in all the good things that I have 
                designed for my obedient people to have. I have spoken!  |   
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                 | ( 
                Summary : This people looked and 
                sounded really spiritual while they were still doing wrong. God 
                would not go with that. He called them to care for the poor and 
                oppressed and said when they did that His blessing would return 
                to their lives )  |    
           We 
          hope this example both shows an approach as to how to increase understanding, 
          while at the same time helping this particular passage come alive in 
          a new way.  Why 
          don't you take a Bible and find a passage of Scripture and write it 
          out in your own words and see what it says to you?    |